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I like the humor behind this! It reminds me of old Flipnote animations for some reason. But, I do feel like you need to work on the animation-- especially since at times it can be very hard to understand what is happening in a scene.

Overall, I think the humor is good, but you should try and make the animation a bit less rough.

JimBobLad responds:

Thanks mate means alot

I thought this was a quite enjoyable animation that captures the song pretty well despite censoring bits of it. The animation was bouncy despite its limited animation style and kept up well with the pace of the song. I would've loved to see a more developed version of this with colors and maybe more detail, but I still enjoyed it nonetheless!

tastysaop responds:

thank you for the feed back!

I respect the effort in this! It's not too bad and the voice acting has effort in it. I would suggest trying to animate it more next time and possibly look into how you mix your audio, as some character's voices were harder to hear than others.

This is wonderfully animated. Amazing work!

Koyle responds:

Thanks! I used some tricks and shortcuts here and there with the animation so I'm glad I managed to keep it effective while saving time.

This is extremely hilarious. I love everything from the animation to the humor and more. Amazing work!

I do like the paper style, but you should next time add more to this-- just so it doesn't feel like a slideshow. I think what you have is nice, but should be refined. Try adding some type of background music, dialogue, or even sound effects to make it more dynamic.

But, I will say, for your first movie it isn't a terrible attempt. It just needs refining. So don't be discouraged by anything, just try again.

Though your animation skills are good, you should try and post a more complete animation on Newgrounds instead of a compilation of unfinished animations.

You have the skill to make something that can be really good (especially with how fluid some of the WIPs in this reel are), it's just a matter of applying yourself and making something substancial.

RamuneFever responds:

Thank you for your input! I'll keep that in mind as I go forward! :)

I actually really really like this despite how short it is. I genuinely think if you had more time to refine this and make it longer, it would be really great. Though the animation at the start is charming but nothing that crazy, the sprites at the end are extremely good and well animated.

I would love to see more of this if you decide to flesh it out after the FunkinJam.

I love your art style-- it's extremely eye-catching and I like how this animation is done. I just wish that there was a bit more animation to this to really blow me away. But nonetheless, this is good, it just leaves me wishing for a bit more.

If you decide to return to animating, I think you'll do really good.

Pretty funny. Honestly, kind of reminds me a bit of old Newgrounds parody animations weirdly enough. Plus, it's pretty well animated. Definitely keep making more stuff like this.

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